What are some common mistakes people make in business presentations?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many presenters put too much text on their slides and end up reading them word for word, which makes the audience lose interest.
Some don’t organize their content clearly, so their message becomes hard to follow.
They sometimes ignore the audience’s needs and focus only on what they want to say.
Also, poor time management and lack of rehearsal can make the presentation less professional.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. Some don’t organize their content clearly, so their message becomes hard to follow.
Thank you for doing your homework! Your sentences are in great form. Keep it up!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. Many presenters put too much text on their slides and end up reading them word for word, which makes the audience lose interest.
>>CORRECT!
2. Some don’t organize their content clearly, so their message becomes hard to follow.
>>CORRECT!
3. They sometimes ignore the audience’s needs and focus only on what they want to say.
>>CORRECT!
4. Also, poor time management and lack of rehearsal can make the presentation less professional.
>>CORRECT!
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