What are some common struggles that happen within your workplace?
학생이 쓴 원문
Employees have to work between Min. 40hr to Max. 52hr according to revised labor law in korea.
It is important to control our workload.
Our work and life balance is better because of revised labor law.
Sometimes, You have to work overtime due to urgent project issue or critical quality issue.
We have to get approval to work overtime from our boss. but the approval is not easy to us.
We have to submit the plan to work overtime.
In some cases, employees work overtime without approval due to difficulty to get a approval.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. It is important to control our workload.
3. Our work and life balance is better because of revised labor law.
4. Sometimes, You have to work overtime due to urgent project issue or critical quality issue.
5. We have to get approval to work overtime from our boss. but the approval is not easy to us.
6. We have to submit the plan to work overtime.
7. In some cases, employees work overtime without approval due to difficulty to get a approval.
Thank you for your diligence in doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. Employees have to work between Min. 40hr to Max. 52hr according to revised labor law in korea.
>>Employees have to work between 40 and 52 hours according to the revised labor law in Korea.
2. It is important to control our workload.
>>CORRECT!
3. Our work and life balance is better because of revised labor law.
>> Our work and life balance is better now because of the revised labor law.
4. Sometimes, You have to work overtime due to urgent project issue or critical quality issue.
>>Sometimes, you have to work overtime due to urgent project issues or critical quality issues.
5. We have to get approval to work overtime from our boss. but the approval is not easy to us.
>>We have to get the approval to work overtime from our boss, but it is not easy for us.
6. We have to submit the plan to work overtime.
>>CORRECT!
7. In some cases, employees work overtime without approval due to difficulty to get a approval.
>>In some cases, employees have to work overtime without any approval due to the difficulty of getting one.
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