What are some common struggles that happen within your workplace?
학생이 쓴 원문
Work in the company is team-play, not solo-play.
Sometimes, trouble happened during work.
The objective of company and each division and person is not same. it cause the trouble.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
Work in the company is team-play, not solo-play.
>> CORRECT
>> Work in a company requires teamwork, not solo work.
Sometimes, trouble happened during work.
Sometimes, trouble happened during work.
>> Sometimes, problems happen at work.
The objective of company and each division and person is not same. it cause the trouble.
>> The objectives of the company, each division, and each person are not the same, and this causes trouble.
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