What are some countries that you would never visit?
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Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I don\'t want to visit countries are low in female human rights.
>> I don\'t want to visit countries that are low in female human rights.
In middle east countries, I saw many cases that foreign women get hurt or die because of the countries\'s people.
>> In the Middle East, I saw many cases where foreign women get hurt or die because of the country\'s local people.
I can\'t endure the risks only for my travel.
>> I can\'t endure the risks only for traveling.
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