What are some countries that you would never visit?

2021-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I don\'t want to visit countries are low in female human rights. In middle east countries, I saw many cases that foreign women get hurt or die because of the countries\'s people. I can\'t endure the risks only for my travel.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I don\'t want to visit countries are low in female human rights. 

>> I don\'t want to visit countries that are low in female human rights. 

In middle east countries, I saw many cases that foreign women get hurt or die because of the countries\'s people. 

>> In the Middle East, I saw many cases where foreign women get hurt or die because of the country\'s local people.

I can\'t endure the risks only for my travel.

>> I can\'t endure the risks only for traveling.

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