What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them?
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I think I would visit any country if I have an opportunity and safety is guaranteed.
First, I want to learn more about the world and experience something new. I want to experience diverse climates, talk with people from various backgrounds, and try a variety of local food.
Second, I like adventures and I am not afraid of different environments. I would need travel mates or a guide when visiting unsafe countries, but I am willing to go to those countries.
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Ola Cindy.
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-Rachel
I think I would visit any country if I have an opportunity and safety is guaranteed.
>> correct (perfect!)
First, I want to learn more about the world and experience something new.
First, I want to learn more about the world and experience something new.
>> correct
I want to experience diverse climates, talk with people from various backgrounds, and try a variety of local food.
>> correct
>> I want to experience diverse climates, talk with people from all walks of life, and try a variety of local food.
Second, I like adventures and I am not afraid of different environments. I would need travel mates or a guide when visiting unsafe countries, but I am willing to go to those countries.
Second, I like adventures and I am not afraid of different environments. I would need travel mates or a guide when visiting unsafe countries, but I am willing to go to those countries.
>> correct
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