What are some devices that you\'re interested in using and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I always use a smart phone for calling, sending a message, taking a picture, searching for news I am interested in, chatting, loacating places, and so on.
We can do many things using the smart phone.
Second, I use a wireless earphone with smartphone for listening to music and radio, audio files.
Third, I use a smartwatch for checking time and step count and some message.
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Hi, Jayjay!
2. We can do many things using the smart phone.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. First, I always use a smart phone for calling, sending a message, taking a picture, searching for news I am interested in, chatting, loacating places, and so on.
>>First, I always use a smartphone for calling, sending messages, taking pictures, searching for news I’m interested in, chatting, locating places, and more.
2. We can do many things using the smart phone.
>>We can do many things using a smartphone.
3. Second, I use a wireless earphone with smartphone for listening to music and radio, audio files.
>>Second, I use wireless earphones with my smartphone to listen to music, the radio, and audio files.
4. Third, I use a smartwatch for checking time and step count and some message.
>>Third, I use a smartwatch to check the time, step count, and messages.
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