What are some differences between living in the city and living in the country?
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First, we need to drive to the school if we are going to go at the school in the countryside.
In the city, there are a lot of schools, so we don\'t need to drive to the school.
Second, there are less main facilities than the city.
For instance, there are less hospitals than the city.
For the last part, the countryside is a lack of entertainments.
It is hard to enjoy some entertainments with friends, and families.
In my opinion, those are the main differences between the city and the countryside.
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Hello [이름]!
The city sure does have its advantages in most cases haha. Thanks for sharing what you think. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>First, we need to drive to school if we live in the countryside.
In the city, there are a lot of schools, so we don\'t need to drive to the school.
In the city, there are a lot of schools, so we don\'t need to drive to the school.
>>In the city, there are a lot of schools, so we don\'t need to drive to school.
Second, there are less main facilities than the city.
Second, there are less main facilities than the city.
>>Second, there are less main facilities in the countryside than in the city.
For instance, there are less hospitals than the city.
For instance, there are less hospitals than the city.
>>For instance, there are less hospitals than in the city.
For the last part, the countryside is a lack of entertainments.
For the last part, the countryside is a lack of entertainments.
>>For the last part, the countryside lacks sources of entertainment.
It is hard to enjoy some entertainments with friends, and families.
It is hard to enjoy some entertainments with friends, and families.
>>It is hard to enjoy some forms of entertainment with friends, and families.
In my opinion, those are the main differences between the city and the countryside.
>>CORRECT!
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