What are some disadvantages in living in the countryside?
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If I live in the countryside, vehicle is the most important item.
City have a public transportation, so you want to go somewhere, you can take public transportation.
But countryside don\'t have a public transportation.
You want to go somewhere, car is essential equipment.
Second problem is bugs.
I hate bugs, but you can see a lot of bugs when you stay in countryside.
Third problem is important facilities.
For example, market, bank, public office, hospital, department store, restaurant.
These facilities are placed for too far or none of there.
Specially, hospital is really important.
And last problem is a job.
Countryside have not kind of jobs ,like picker, carpenter, online freelancer or farmer, that\'s all.
So this four problem is the disadvantage in living in the countryside.
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Hi there Simon! I always like how you write your homework. You thoughts are organized and precise. You always stand to your argument and you always provide reasons behind it. Amazing job Simon. Until the next one! See you on Monday! Enjoy your weekend! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
City have a public transportation, so you want to go somewhere, you can take public transportation.
>>The city has a public transportation, so if you want to go somewhere, you can take a public transportation.
But countryside don\'t have a public transportation.
>>But the countryside doesn\'t have a public transportation.
You want to go somewhere, car is essential equipment.
>>If you want to go somewhere, a car is an essential equipment.
Second problem is bugs.
>>The second problem is bugs.
I hate bugs, but you can see a lot of bugs when you stay in countryside.
>>I hat bugs but you can see a lot of bugs when you stay in the countryside.
Third problem is important facilities.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Third problem is about important facilities.
OR>>Third problems is the availability of important facilities.
For example, market, bank, public office, hospital, department store, restaurant.
>>For example, markets, banks, public offices, hospitals, department stores and restaurants.
These facilities are placed for too far or none of there.
>>These facilities are placed in a too far place or even none at all.
Specially, hospital is really important.
>>Especially, hospital is really important.
And last problem is a job.
>>CORRECT
OR>> And last problem is the employment aspect.
Countryside have not kind of jobs ,like picker, carpenter, online freelancer or farmer, that\'s all.
>>The countryside have various kinds of jobs like picker, carpenter, online freelancer or farmer, and that\'s all.
So this four problem is the disadvantage in living in the countryside.
>>So, these four problems are the disadvantages in living in the countryside.
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