What are some essential survival tips for outdoor adventures?
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Firstly, the most important thing is water. Because people can\'t survive without water even for a week. If you can\'t get clean water, Hanging some plastic cover over trees could be helpful to get some pure water. The plastic cover will make dew into the water in one place. Additionally, heating body with some leaves will be vital to survive in outdoor adventures.
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Hello there, [이름] Ju!
Did you know that we can survive without drinking water for three to four days. Experts say you can go about 100 hours without drinking when it is an average temperature outside. If it\'s cooler, you can go a little longer. If exposed to hot sunlight, the time is shorter.
- Kristine ^^
Firstly, the most important thing is water.
>> First and foremost, water is essential.
Because people can\'t survive without water even for a week.
>> Due to the fact that people can\'t survive for more than a week without water.
If you can\'t get clean water, Hanging some plastic cover over trees could be helpful to get some pure water.
>> If you don\'t have clean water, you might be able to get some by hanging a piece of plastic over some trees.
The plastic cover will make dew into the water in one place.
>> The plastic cover will enable dew to collect in one area of the water.
Additionally, heating body with some leaves will be vital to survive in outdoor adventures.
>> Additionally, keeping warm while outside will be essential for survival.
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