What are some essential things ?
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What are some essential things you have to do when raising a baby?
I have a daughter.
The most importanting I have to do is to feed her.
She is eating baby formula now.
I need to change her diapers everytime when it's wet.
Still, It's going to take her some time to be fully toilet-trained.
She loves pacifier, but it is not good for her teeth because she is cutting all teeth.
I am feeding her milk with a cup instead of a bottle.
She doesn't like drinking milk with a cup.
She drunk 1,000 ml with the milk bottle a day, but now she was drinking 100 ml only.
I am so worried about that.
I want her to be taller as much as Korean average height.
강사 첨삭
[이름], maybe it's best that you feed her throug the bottle, she's still a baby and there's nothing wrong if she wants to drink thorugh the bottle, when I was a baby I was breastfed by my mother until 2 years of age, but stopped drinking milk when I was five yrs old. My sister's baby is already 6 yrs old but sometimes he still drinks thorugh the bottle, haha! Anyway, I cannot e the judge of that, you are her mother, and you always know what's best for your chid, as they say, "mother knows best".
I have a daughter.
The most importanting I have to do is to feed her.
>> The most important thing I have to do is to feed her.She is eating baby formula now.
>> I am currently feeding her with baby formulaI need to change her diapers everytime when it's wet.
>> I need to change her diapers everytime it's wet.Still, It's going to take her some time to be fully toilet-trained.
She loves pacifier, but it is not good for her teeth because she is cutting all teeth.
>> but it is not good for her teeth because it's damaging her teeth.I am feeding her milk with a cup instead of a bottle.
>> I am feeding her milk through a cup instead of a bottle.She doesn't like drinking milk with a cup.
>> milk in a cupShe drunk 1,000 ml with the milk bottle a day, but now she was drinking 100 ml only.
>>She used to drink 1000 ml of milk in a bottle everyday , but now she is drinks only a 100 ml. I am so worried about that. I want her to be taller as much as Korean average height.
>> I want her to grow tall,as much as possible reach average height.
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