What are some famous drinks in Korea? What food go well with them?
학생이 쓴 원문
The famous drinks is sikhye made of sweet rice which is traditional drink in Korea.
Many people like this drink at Jjimjilbang (Korean dry sauna).
This drink decreases my body cool from hot.
They usually enjoy this sweet drink with egg or snack in that place.
Especially, I like that this drink has grain of rice , sweet and softness. So many children likes that drink, too.
I hope this drink export all over the wolrd like bubble tea.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
The famous drinks is sikhye made of sweet rice which is traditional drink in Korea.
>>> The famous drink is sikhye made of sweet rice which is the traditional drink in Korea.
Many people like this drink at Jjimjilbang (Korean dry sauna).
Many people like this drink at Jjimjilbang (Korean dry sauna).
>>> CORRECT
This drink decreases my body cool from hot.
This drink decreases my body cool from hot.
>>> This drink makes my body cool from hot.
They usually enjoy this sweet drink with egg or snack in that place.
They usually enjoy this sweet drink with egg or snack in that place.
>>> CORRECT
Especially, I like that this drink has grain of rice , sweet and softness.
Especially, I like that this drink has grain of rice , sweet and softness.
>>> Especially, I like that this drink has rice grains and it\'s sweet and soft.
So many children likes that drink, too.
>>> So many children like that drink, too.
I hope this drink export all over the wolrd like bubble tea.
I hope this drink export all over the wolrd like bubble tea.
>>> I hope this drink could be exported all over the world like bubble tea.
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