What are some good habits you have?

2020-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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Even if I am not an organized person, I have the habit to write what to do in the morning. After getting up, I usually go to the desk, sit down on my chair and write the list that has to do today. My husband always is surprised to see my habit that I write my today\'s to-do list very specifically because he knows how I am clumsy and careless. I write my list on the specific notebook buying in Korea. And I check the item of the list after finishing the item by the black thick marker. It might motivate me to see that the list became deleted. But it remains 4-5 items at the end of the day because I make lots of lists to do. It is not good anytime. Sometimes, I squeeze my life in and blame me if I didn\'t finish the to-do list. It makes me sad and frustrated. My husband advised me to make a reasonable goal and praise myself even if I don\'t meet. And I need to shake my routine up and spice it up on weekends. Also, I make an order to do what is important and what it doesn\'t matter.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday, [이름]! ^^
You really amaze me with your long sentences.
I think with a little bit more practice, you will definitely improve!

- T. Rina ^^


1. Even if I am not an organized person, I have the habit to write what to do in the morning. 
>> CORRECT!

2. After getting up, I usually go to the desk, sit down on my chair and write the list that has to do today. 
>> After getting up, I usually go to the desk, sit down on my chair and write a list of things that I have to do today.

3. My husband always is surprised to see my habit that I write my today\'s to-do list very specifically because he knows how I am clumsy and careless. 
>> My husband always is surprised to see my habit that I write my today\'s to-do list very specifically/thoroughly because he knows how clumsy and careless I am.

4. I write my list on the specific notebook buying in Korea. 
>> I write my list on the specific notebook I bought in Korea.

5. And I check the item of the list after finishing the item by the black thick marker. 
>> And I check the items from the list after finishing them using a black thick marker.

6. It might motivate me to see that the list became deleted. 
>> It might motivate me to see that the items from the list have been all marked.

7. But it remains 4-5 items at the end of the day because I make lots of lists to do. 
>> But there are at least 4-5 unmarked items at the end of the day because I list a lot of things.

8. It is not good anytime. 
>> CORRECT!

9. Sometimes, I squeeze my life in and blame me if I didn\'t finish the to-do list.
>>  I sometimes squeeze my tasks in and blame myself if I didn\'t finish the to-do list.

10. It makes me sad and frustrated.
>> CORRECT!

11. My husband advised me to make a reasonable goal and praise myself even if I don\'t meet. 
>> My husband advised me to make a reasonable goal and praise myself even if I don\'t meet them.

12. And I need to shake my routine up and spice it up on weekends.
>> CORRECT!

13. Also, I make an order to do what is important and what it doesn\'t matter.
>> Also, I make an order to do what is important and what doesn\'t matter.

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