What are some good points about social networking? What are some bad points about social networking?
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The good thing is that you can easily share your daily life The downside is that fighting can occur while doing social networking.
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The good thing is that you can easily share your daily life
>>> The good thing about SNS is that you can easily share your daily life.
The downside is that fighting can occur while doing social networking.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> The downside is that misunderstanding can occur while doing social networking.
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