What are some good points and bad points about social networking?

2018-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Facebook is the most popular social network in the world. It's a good point is communicate with many different people and i know their thoughts and lives Its bad point is it loses privacy, leaks personal information and is use as a crime.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework Sir [이름]!

I do agree with you. In the Philippines, Facebook is also very common.

Criminals also use this to victimize.

I\'ll talk to you again on Monday! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Facebook is the most popular social network in the world.
>> Facebook is the most popular social networking site in the world.
It\'s a good point is communicate with many different people and i know their thoughts and lives
>> The good point is that I can communicate with the different people and I can know their thoughts and their way of living.
Its bad point is it loses privacy, leaks personal information and is use as a crime.

>> The bad point is that it looses privacy and the spread of personal information may be used for crimes.

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