What are some good things or bad things about having a computer?
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Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
In Good thing, it is comfortable to do anything.
>> The good thing is it is comfortable to use when doing anything.
Doing homework, finding materials and making Power Point are examples.
>> Doing homework, finding materials, and making a Power Point are some examples.
In bad thing, It can be used too much.
>> The bad thing is it can be used too much.
Playing games, watching something and chatting get included.
>> Playing games, watching something, and chatting are some examples.
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