What are some health problems that smoking can cause?(ANSWER)

2018-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Smoking can cause a lot of health problems. Many people die from smoking. 1. Lung cancer Lung cancer is the most popular disease that smoking can cause. Lung cancer can cause a difficulties in breathing. Also, it is the most painful diease. 2. Promotion of aging When we smoke, our skin made a lot of wrinkles. Then, you can look old than your real age. Let's not smoke! -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What are some health problems that smoking can cause?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

Smoking can cause a lot of health problems.
Many people die from smoking.
1. Lung cancer
Lung cancer is the most popular disease that smoking can cause.
Lung cancer can cause a difficulties in breathing.
Also, it is the most painful diease.
2. Promotion of aging
When we smoke, our skin made a lot of wrinkles.
Then, you can look old than your real age.
Let\'s not smoke!

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CORRECTIONS:

 

Smoking can cause a lot of health problems.
Many people die from smoking.
1. Lung cancer
Lung cancer is the most popular disease that smoking can cause.
Lung cancer can
cause difficulties in breathing.
Also, it is the most painful
disease.
2. Promotion of aging
When we smoke, our skin
makes a lot of wrinkles.
Then, you can look
older than your real age.
Let\'s not smoke!

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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