What are some health problems you have/had?
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A few months ago, I felt pain in my right stomach. But now, It\'s OK. I think that the best issue of my health is body weight. I getting fat while care my children and work my job. Also, Doing not golf practice anymore. My body weight was getting too much.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. Always take good care of your health!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. A few months ago, I felt pain in my right stomach. But now, It\'s OK.
>>A few months ago, I felt some pain in my right stomach, but I\'m okay now.
2. I think that the best issue of my health is body weight.
>>I think that the best issue regarding my health is body weight.
3. I getting fat while care my children and work my job.
>>I got fat while caring for my children and working at my job.
4. Also, Doing not golf practice anymore.
>>Also, I stopped doing golf practice anymore.
5. My body weight was getting too much.
>>My body weight was too much.
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