What are some inventions you hope to see in the future?-Teacher Vance

2018-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Today, I will talk about some invetions I hope to see in the future. I know that there will be many more inventions in the future than now. For example, facilities such as the AI robot, brainwave technology, or unmanned transportation might become the natural technology of today's smartphones. So I try to write about the most anticipated and desired future inventions of the two. First of all, the invention that I most expect is the one called "Hoverka." This invention is a car that can freely travel on land and water, and in the future it may be an invention such as a modern car. How is it? Can't you expect it just by thinking about it? The invention combines the current "Hovercraft" with technology. So I am most looking forward to this invention. Today I wrote about my most anticipated future invention. I must finish my writing hoping that these inventions will happen in the future.

강사 첨삭

Today, I will talk about some invetions I hope to see in the future.

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I know that there will be many more inventions in the future than now.

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For example, facilities such as the AI robot, brainwave technology, or unmanned transportation might become the natural technology of today\'s smartphones.

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So I try to write about the most anticipated and desired future inventions of the two.

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 First of all, the invention that I most expect is the one called \"Hoverka.\"

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 This invention is a car that can freely travel on land and water, and in the future it may be an invention such as a modern car.

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 How is it? Can\'t you expect it just by thinking about it?

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The invention combines the current \"Hovercraft\" with technology. So I am most looking forward to this invention.

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 Today I wrote about my most anticipated future invention.

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 I must finish my writing hoping that these inventions will happen in the future.

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