What are some manners from the past that are rarely or never practiced anymore?
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I personally think manners for forcing alcohol doesn\'t work anymore in my country because people in 90s generation have experienced about it. They don\'t have choice due to manners. People in previous generation think if you refused alcohol given by the older, it wouldn\'t be manners. However now, it\'s not anymore. Nowadays, people think it\'s more important to their own lives. In the past, we lived in a cooperative way, but now, we think that the way we live as individuals has changed. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I personally think manners for forcing alcohol doesn\'t work anymore in my country because people in 90s generation have experienced about it.
>> I personally think manners for forcing someone to drink alcohol doesn\'t work anymore in my country because people in the 90s have experienced it.
They don\'t have a choice due to manners.
>> CORRECT!They don\'t have a choice due to manners.
People in previous generation think if you refused alcohol given by the older, it wouldn\'t be manners.
>> People in previous generations think that if you refuse the alcohol given by the older people, it would be bad manners.
However now, it\'s not anymore.
>> CORRECT!Nowadays, people think it\'s more important to their own lives.
>> Nowadays, people think it\'s more important to live their own lives.
In the past, we lived in a cooperative way, but now, we think that the way we live as individuals has changed. :)
>> In the past, we lived in a cooperative way, but now, we think that the way we live as individuals have changed. :)
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