What are some measures that we can do to reduce our carbon footprints that affect our environment?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are several methods to reduce our carbon footprints.
1. In the summer or winter, we need to make a temperature moderately.
2. If we go to a cafe, we can use personal cup instead of plastic one.
3. We try to reduce ride a car, instead we can use a bike or on foot.
4. When we don\'t use electricities, turn them off.
강사 첨삭
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2. If we go to a cafe, we can use personal cup instead of plastic one.
3. We try to reduce ride a car, instead we can use a bike or on foot.
4. When we don\'t use electricity, turn them off.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. In the summer or winter, we need to make a temperature moderately.
>>In summer or winter, we need to balance temperature moderately.
2. If we go to a cafe, we can use personal cup instead of plastic one.
>>If we go to a cafe, we can use our personal reusable cups instead of the disposable ones.
3. We try to reduce ride a car, instead we can use a bike or on foot.
>>We try to lessen our car rides. Instead, we can use a bike or walk on foot.
4. When we don\'t use electricity, turn them off.
>>When we aren\'t using electricity, we can turn them off.
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