What are some of advantage of cooking your meals at home ?
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Good morning Kim!^^
Thank you for sharing your idea about cooking meals at home. I hope that your skills in cooking will improve more so you can cook for your friends.^^
Kelly^^
There are many advantage of cooking my meals at home.
>> There are many advantages of cooking my meals at home.
First of all, it is healther than when I eat out.
>> First of all, it is healthier than eating out.
Many restaurants use flaver enhancer and I don\'t like it beacause it is not good for my health.
>> Many restaurants use flavor enhancer and I don\'t like it beacause it is not good for my health.
Second, it is cheap and I can save coffee cost. beacause if I eat out, usually I also drink a cup of coffee.
>> Secondly, it is cheaper and I can save coffee cost, because if I eat out, usually I also drink a cup of coffee.
Third, I can improve my cooking skills.
>> Thirdly, I can improve my cooking skills.
sometime I cook for my self and when I eat that, it makes me feel happy.
>> Sometimes, I cook for myself and when I eat what I cook, I feel happy.
and After impoving my cooking skills , I want to share the food that I cooked with my friends.
>> If my cooking skills has improved, I want to share the food that I cook to my friends.
and recently many people live alone in Korea.
>> Nowadays, many people live alone in Korea.
So many vegetables and fruits are packed and sold for one person.
>> Correct.
that also make people easy to cook at home.
>> That also makes it easy for people to cook at home.
But nowadays, people don\'t have enough time to cook their meals and to eat them in their house.
>> Correct.
so I think usually they eat out or eat delivery food.
>> So, I think, they usually eat out or eat delivery food.
And In that sense, I think Korea is so nice. beacause our delivery service is amazing
>> In that sense, I think it is nice to live in Korea, because our delivery service is amazing.
we can order anyfood at anywhere.
>> We can order any kind of food anywhere.
Actually we can order food even at a park.
>> Actually, we can order food even at a park.
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