What are some of advantage of cooking your meals at home ?

2016-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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There are many advantage of cooking my meals at home. First of all, it is healther than when I eat out. Many restaurants use flaver enhancer and I don't like it beacause it is not good for my health. Second, it is cheap and I can save coffee cost. beacause if I eat out, usually I also drink a cup of coffee. Third, I can improve my cooking skills. sometime I cook for my self and when I eat that, it makes me feel happy. and After impoving my cooking skills , I want to share the food that I cooked with my friends. and recently many people live alone in Korea. So many vegetables and fruits are packed and sold for one person. that also make people easy to cook at home. But nowadays, people don't have enough time to cook their meals and to eat them in their house. so I think usually they eat out or eat delivery food. And In that sense, I think Korea is so nice. beacause our delivery service is amazing. we can order anyfood at anywhere. Actually we can order food even at a park.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Kim!^^

Thank you for sharing your idea about cooking meals at home. I hope that your skills in cooking will improve more so you can cook for your friends.^^

Kelly^^

There are many advantage of cooking my meals at home. 

>> There are many advantages of cooking my meals at home. 
First of all, it is healther than when I eat out.

>> First of all, it is healthier than eating out.
Many restaurants use flaver enhancer and I don\'t like it beacause it is not good for my health. 

>> Many restaurants use flavor enhancer and I don\'t like it beacause it is not good for my health. 
Second, it is cheap and I can save coffee cost. beacause if I eat out, usually I also drink a cup of coffee.

>> Secondly, it is cheaper and I can save coffee cost, because if I eat out, usually I also drink a cup of coffee. 
Third, I can improve my cooking skills.

>> Thirdly, I can improve my cooking skills.

sometime I cook for my self and when I eat that, it makes me feel happy.

>> Sometimes, I cook for myself and when I eat what I cook, I feel happy.  

and After impoving my cooking skills , I want to share the food that I cooked with my friends.

>> If my cooking skills has improved, I want to share the food that I cook to my friends.

and recently many people live alone in Korea.

>> Nowadays, many people live alone in Korea.

So many vegetables and fruits are packed and sold for one person.

>> Correct.

that also make people easy to cook at home.

>> That also makes it easy for people to cook at home.
But nowadays, people don\'t have enough time to cook their meals and to eat them in their house.

>> Correct.

so I think usually they eat out or eat delivery food.
>> So, I think, they usually eat out or
eat delivery food.

And In that sense, I think Korea is so nice. beacause our delivery service is amazing

>> In that sense, I think it is nice to live in Korea, because our delivery service is amazing.

we can order anyfood at anywhere.

>> We can order any kind of food anywhere.

Actually we can order food even at a park.

>> Actually, we can order food even at a park.

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