What are some of the advantages of cooking your meals at home? How about the disadvantages?
학생이 쓴 원문
Cooking at home will probably make healthier than delivery or outside food. It is made clean by selecting the ingredients ourselves. It continuously costs a lot if we eat delivery food every day, but when we cook at home, it costs more because we have to buy many ingredients to make one food. For example, if I want to shrimp fried rice, I buy eat it at 8~9,000 [이름], but when I cooking at home, I need to buy shrimp, rice, and some vegetables. Another disadvantage is cleaning up after cooking. There are many things to clean, such as the tools used to cook and the plates we need after cook.
However I like cooking at home that it goes beyond these disadvantages.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Cooking at home is sometimes expensive because of the purchasing the ingredients. But you\'ve got more amount of food when it\'s done compared to ordering in a restaurant. If you notice, food in restaurants are actually cheaper, but the quantity is not enough because of the other things you pay aside from the ingredients. Learn to cook at least some easy dishes. ^^
~T. Maine
Cooking at home will probably make healthier than delivery or
outside food.
>>Cooking at home is probably healthier than eating out or ordering through the delivery service.
It is made clean by selecting the ingredients ourselves.
>>It is cleaner and safer by selecting the ingredients ourselves.
It continuously costs a lot if we eat delivery food every day, but when
we cook at home, it costs more because we have to buy many ingredients
to make one food.
>>Correct.
For example, if I want to shrimp fried rice, I buy eat
it at 8~9,000 [이름], but when I cooking at home, I need to buy shrimp,
rice, and some vegetables.
>>For example, if I want to eat shrimp fried rice, I need to buy it at 8,000~9,000 [이름]. But when I cook at home, I need to buy shrimp, rice, and some vegetables.
Another disadvantage is cleaning up after
cooking.
>>Correct.
There are many things to clean, such as the tools used to cook
and the plates we need after cook.
>>There are many things to clean up such as the materials used in cooking and the plates used after eating.
However I like cooking at home that it goes beyond these disadvantages.
>>However, I like cooking at home even though it goes beyond these disadvantages.
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