What are some of the advantages of living in a city?

2019-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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What are some of the advantages of living in a city? I think I can easily get access to everything if I dwell in cities. And also, I do not need to worry about the ignorance of governmental administration.

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Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework!

I also like the convenience that a city brings but I also like the peace that a rural area can bring.

Nevertheless, I would like to retire in a place near the beach. haha~

See you again next time!

I think I can easily get access to everything if I dwell in cities.

>>CORRECT

And also, I do not need to worry about the ignorance of governmental administration.

>> Also, I do not need to worry about the ignorance of political administration.

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