What are some of the best jobs you can think of?

2021-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I think the best job is Entertainer & Selebrity. They are enjoying all of the work. and earn the money. I don\'t think they will be stressed.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think the best job is Entertainer & Selebrity.

>> I think the best job is being an entertainer and a celebrity.
They are enjoying all of the work. and earn the money.

>> They are enjoying their work while earning money.

I don\'t think they will be stressed.

>> CORRECT!

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