What are some of the ill effects of poor sleep?
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Without enough sleep at night, I willl feel sleepy and can\'t concentrate on my job at work. In the worst case, I may get angry at colleagues at work for trivial matters. This is because insufficient sleep can make me sensitive.
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Steve, I appreciate you doing your homework every class. Thank you for your hard work.
- Debbie
Without enough sleep at night, I willl feel sleepy and can\'t concentrate on my job at work.
>> Without enough sleep at night, I feel sleepy at work and can\'t concentrate on my job.
In the worst case, I may get angry at colleagues at work for trivial matters.
>> In the worst-case scenario, I may get angry at my colleagues over trivial matters.
This is because insufficient sleep can make me sensitive.
>> This is a good sentence.
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