What are some of the most important customs of your country?
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It is very many. First, the Koreans always say \'more faster\'. Because the Koreans wants something is very perfect in a short time. Second, always be nice to senior people. Because a long time ago, the manners that greet senior person nicely and eat food after that person eat are traditional and basic customs in Korea.
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Good evening Daisy. ^_^
Thank you very much for always being diligent in answering our essay questions.
I admire your hard work. ^^ I agree that older people should be respected. As for doing things fast all the time, I think Filipinos would have to work hard on that.
Thank you very much for always being diligent in answering our essay questions.
I admire your hard work. ^^ I agree that older people should be respected. As for doing things fast all the time, I think Filipinos would have to work hard on that.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again on Monday and have a great weekend. ^^
See you again on Monday and have a great weekend. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> There are a lot of important customs in my country.
First, the Koreans always say \'more faster\'.
>> First, Koreans always say \"do it faster\".
Because the Koreans wants something is very perfect in a short time.
>> It\'s because Koreans want things to be done very perfectly in just a short time.
Second, always be nice to senior people.
>> CORRECT!
Because a long time ago, the manners that greet senior person nicely and eat food after that person eat are traditional and basic customs in Korea.
>> This is because it has been a tradition for a long time where older people should be greeted in a respectful manner and be allowed to eat first. These are some of the traditional and basic customs in Korea.
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