What are some of the most interesting or unusual things you\'ve seen or experienced while traveling?
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while traveling in Bolivia, I rode our jeep around the sand desert.
I take a boad on the sand, there are only sand and a hill foarmed by sand.
It feels like a ride.It was amazig and scaried.
I \'ve never seen before, It was funny too.
강사 첨삭
Hello Grace, thank you for doing the assignment! I\'ve never been to Bolivia, but your story made it interesting. The experience must be so unique to you! :)
~ T. Ezra
while traveling in Bolivia, I rode our jeep around the sand desert.
>> CORRECT
Or >> During my trip to Bolivia, I drove our jeep across a vast sand desert.
I take a boad on the sand, there are only sand and a hill foarmed by sand.
>> I took a board on the sand; there was only sand and a hill formed by sand.
It feels like a ride.It was amazig and scaried.
>> It felt like a ride. It was amazing and scary.
I \'ve never seen that before, It was funny too.
>> I had never seen anything like it before. It was funny too.
~ T. Ezra
while traveling in Bolivia, I rode our jeep around the sand desert.
>> CORRECT
Or >> During my trip to Bolivia, I drove our jeep across a vast sand desert.
I take a boad on the sand, there are only sand and a hill foarmed by sand.
>> I took a board on the sand; there was only sand and a hill formed by sand.
It feels like a ride.It was amazig and scaried.
>> It felt like a ride. It was amazing and scary.
I \'ve never seen that before, It was funny too.
>> I had never seen anything like it before. It was funny too.
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