What are some of the most popular books in the world? Why do so many people want to read them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most popular book is Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling. It is about magic, Hogwarts. Also, its composition of characters is great. Because of this perfect combination, I believe so many people want to read it. It was made into a movie, so I think I don\'t need to add explanation to express it any more. I hope many books are written by great writers. Their books can make the society be bright.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Kimberly!
I totally agree that Harry Potter is one of the best book installments! It was my childhood, and it brought me to a different world.
Can you believe that the author, J. K. Rowling, was refused by publishers 13 times? Finally, someone gave her a chance to publish her book, and it became an amazing phenomenon.
Just like her, I see that you are diligent and hardworking in your studies. Keep it up!
~ Teacher Gela
I think the most popular book is Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling.
>> CORRECT
It is about magic, Hogwarts.
>> It is about magic at Hogwarts.
Also, its composition of characters is great.
>> CORRECT
Because of this perfect combination, I believe so many people want to read it.
>> Because of this perfect combination, I believe many people want to read it.
OR >> Because of this perfect combination, I believe countless people want to read it.
It was made into a movie, so I think I don\'t need to add explanation to express it any more.
>> It was made into a movie, so I think I don\'t need to add an explanation to express it anymore.
I hope many books are written by great writers.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I hope great authors write many books.
Their books can make the society be bright.
>> Their books can make society bright.
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