What are some of the most serious environmental problems we have nowadays?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most serious environmental problem is floating garbage on the sea. The floating garbage is big as a island, but we don\'t know that how many island are there. Nobody tries to remove the garbage. Some environment groups have tried to gather money to report this problem to the world.
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Hi, [이름]ny! :)
Thank you very much for taking the time to share your opinion regarding this matter.
Thank you very much for taking the time to share your opinion regarding this matter.
I agree that the problem on the increasing number of garbage in the sea is of great concern.
The ocean is so vast that it\'s actually very difficult to clean it.
Because of that, more marine animals are in danger of ingesting those garbage.
I hope more awareness would be raised so people would know how serious this problem is.
I hope you\'re having a great day! See you later in class. ^^
~Teacher Charry
I hope more awareness would be raised so people would know how serious this problem is.
I hope you\'re having a great day! See you later in class. ^^
~Teacher Charry
The most serious environmental problem is floating garbage on the sea.
>> The most serious environmental problem is the increasing number of floating garbage in the sea.
The floating garbage is big as a island, but we don\'t know that how many
island are there.
>> These floating garbage can be as big as an island, but we don\'t know that how many
islands of garbage are there.
Nobody tries to remove the garbage.
>> CORRECT!
Some environment
groups have tried to gather money to report this problem to the world.
>> Some environmental
groups have tried to gather money to report this problem to the world.
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