What are some of the most unique landscapes you’ve ever seen?

2024-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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There are two unique landscapes I have ever seen. I have been there when I was travelling to the west side of America with my family One of them is the Grand Canyon and another one is the Yosemite national park in California. The Grand Canyon is a huge valley with a depth of more than 1km and a length of 350km which is almost as long as South Korea. And Yosemite National Park has vertical cliffs over 1km in height, which is why many climbers visit. At that time, I was so surprised to see the two places that I couldn\'t close my open mouth.

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There are two unique landscapes I have ever seen.

>> Correct.
I have been there when I was travelling to the west side of America with my family

>> I was there when I was traveling to the west side of America with my family.
One of them is the Grand Canyon and another one is the Yosemite national park in California.

>> One of them is the Grand Canyon, and another one is the Yosemite National Park in California.
The Grand Canyon is a huge valley with a depth of more than 1km and a length of 350km which is almost as long as South Korea.

>> Correct.
And Yosemite National Park has vertical cliffs over 1km in height, which is why many climbers visit.

>> Correct.
At that time, I was so surprised to see the two places that I couldn\'t close my open mouth.

>> At that time, I was so surprised to see the two places that I couldn\'t close my mouth.

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