What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your a

2016-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Above all, the qualities a good parent should have are love and patience. You can argue that who doesn’t love his/her own children, however, the expression is important. In the old Korean society that has been influenced greatly by Confucianism, it was not regarded as a virtue for parents to express their love or affection toward their children. Embracing, touching, or kissing their children was somewhat not a usual thing. Most of our parents are not used to saying “love you” directly. I think patience is the most important attribute. You can easily be aware of it once you try to teach a kid something. Think about how many times you repeated “Mom”to your child. Before they actually pronounce mom correctly, it takes almost two years.During the period, you may have said mom to your baby tens of thousands times. Even if it seems to be too easy for adults, it takes some time for kids. They make mistakes or sometimes derail. We need to wait until they stand up on their own foot.

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Hello there Sir [이름]! Happy Thursday. I can say that you are a loving and caring parent. Your daughter is so blessed to have you and your wife. What can you say about those parents who abuse their kids? We can talk about this in class. See you. Teacher Nina   Above all, the qualities a good parent should have are love and patience. >> correct You can argue that who doesn’t love his/her own children, however, the expression is important. >> correct In the old Korean society that has been influenced greatly by Confucianism, it was not regarded as a virtue for parents to express their love or affection toward their children. >> correct Embracing, touching, or kissing their children was somewhat not a usual thing. >> correct Most of our parents are not used to saying “love you” directly. >> Most of our parents are not used in saying “love you” directly. I think patience is the most important attribute. >> correct You can easily be aware of it once you try to teach a kid something. >> correct Think about how many times you repeated “Mom”to your child. >> correct Before they actually pronounce mom correctly, it takes almost two years. >> correct During the period, you may have said mom to your baby tens of thousands times. >> During this period, you may have said mom to your baby ten thousand times. Even if it seems to be too easy for adults, it takes some time for kids. >> correct They make mistakes or sometimes derail. >> correct We need to wait until they stand up on their own foot. >> correct

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