What are some of the reasons people choose to adopt?

2024-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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Some couples who can’t bear a child resort to adopt a child from a domestic or abroad institution because they have dynamism to rear a child and have a happy family with a child. Or there are some parents to adopt a child from a poor country where a child can’t get educated or grow well because of bad situation around him, such as a civil war or long-standing famine. They’re adopting a child in a humane perspective or religious faith. They believe that children in a bad environment can grow well with a good support and they don’t hesitate to do the role believing that it could be God’s calling for them. If I were asked to adopt a child, I can\'t say yes to the question confidently because I came to know how hard it is to grow a child. What if I don\'t feel responsibility brought about by biological relation to a child, After many years of looking after three children, I realized that adoption is easier said than done.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Steve!

Those are good reasons. It\'s incredibly fulfilling to provide a stable, loving home for a child who needs one. I understand your concern. We have different experiences, and that influences our stand on this topic. Sharing your opinions is brave. I admire that. Thank you for sharing them. ^^

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Some couples who can’t bear a child resort to adopt a child from a domestic or abroad institution because they have dynamism to rear a child and have a happy family with a child.

- Some couples who can’t bear a child resort to adopting a child from a domestic or foreign institution because they have the dynamism to rear a child and have a happy family with a child.

Or there are some parents to adopt a child from a poor country where a child can’t get educated or grow well because of bad situation around him, such as a civil war or long-standing famine.

- On the other hand, there are some parents who adopt a child from a poor country where a child can’t get educated or grow well because of bad situations around him, such as a civil war or long-standing famine.

They’re adopting a child in a humane perspective or religious faith.

- They’re adopting a child from a humane perspective or religious faith.

They believe that children in a bad environment can grow well with a good support and they don’t hesitate to do the role believing that it could be God’s calling for them.

- They believe that children in a bad environment can grow well with good support, and they don’t hesitate to take on the role, believing that it could be God’s calling for them.

If I were asked to adopt a child, I can\'t say yes to the question confidently because I came to know how hard it is to grow a child.

- If I were asked to adopt a child, I can\'t say yes to the question confidently because I came to know how hard it is to raise a child.

What if I don\'t feel responsibility brought about by biological relation to a child,

- What if I don\'t feel responsible for the biological relationship to a child?

After many years of looking after three children, I realized that adoption is easier said than done.

- CORRECT.

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