What are some of the risks of doing extreme sports?
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Doing extreme sports is dangerous for novice. Some people enjoy the extreme sports but there are risks as well. It depends on risk or thilling. In my case, I prefer normal sports.
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Doing extreme sports is dangerous for novice.
>> Doing extreme sports is dangerous for a novice.
Some people enjoy the extreme sports but there are risks as well.
>> Some people enjoy extreme sports but there are risks involved as well.
It depends on risk or thilling.
>> It depends on the risk or thrill.
In my case, I prefer normal sports.
>> CORRECT~~
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