What are some of the strangest fashions you have seen?
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Hello, [이름]! Thank you for sending me your homework. I find this man very fascinating. I have never seen a man wearing a skirt before >.<
Anyway, see you tomorrow!~
-T. Elisha
i have seen the man who weared pink short skirts,tight t-shirt and ugg.
>> I have seen a man wearing a pink miniskirt, a tight t-shirt and a pair of UGG.
that skirts can be seen like ballet shows.
>> This type of skirt can be seen on ballet shows.
first day when i saw him, that time was dawn.
>> I saw him for the first time at dawn.
i was going to my home rode by taxi and there was near the central station.
>> I was on my way home by taxi, it was near the central station.
it was shoking to me.
>> I was very shocked.
so next day. as soon as i arrived the language school. i told everything to my friends.
>> As soon as I arrived at my language school the next day, I told my friends about him.
surprisingly my friends know him. because they lived near the central city.
>> Surprisingly, my friends know him because they are living near the central city.
or: >>> Surprisingly, my friends know who he is because they are living near the central city.
>>>> My friends surprisingly know who he is because they are living near the central city.
he wears different skirts everyday.
>> He wears a different skirt every day.
so after that day, i could see him after school.
>> I see him after going to school starting that day.
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