What are some of the strangest fashions you have seen?

2018-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

학생이 쓴 원문

i have seen the man who weared pink short skirts,tight t-shirt and ugg. that skirts can be seen like ballet shows. first day when i saw him, that time was dawn. i was going to my home rode by taxi and there was near the central station. it was shoking to me. so next day. as soon as i arrived the language school. i told everything to my friends. surprisingly my friends know him. because they lived near the central city. he wears different skirts everyday. so after that day, i could see him after school.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for sending me your homework. I find this man very fascinating. I have never seen a man wearing a skirt before >.<

Anyway, see you tomorrow!~

-T. Elisha

i have seen the man who weared pink short skirts,tight t-shirt and ugg.

>> I have seen a man wearing a pink miniskirt, a tight t-shirt and a pair of UGG.
 that skirts can be seen like ballet shows.

>> This type of skirt can be seen on ballet shows.
 first day when i saw him, that time was dawn.

>> I saw him for the first time at dawn.
 i was going to my home rode by taxi and there was near the central station.

>> I was on my way home by taxi, it was near the central station.

it was shoking to me. 

>> I was very shocked.
 so next day. as soon as i arrived the language school.  i told everything to my friends.

>> As soon as I arrived at my language school the next day, I told my friends about him.
surprisingly my friends know him. because they lived near the central city.

 >> Surprisingly, my friends know him because they are living near the central city.

    or:  >>> Surprisingly, my friends know who he is because they are living near the central city.  

          >>>> My friends surprisingly know who he is because they are living near the central city. 
 he wears different skirts everyday.

>> He wears a different skirt every day.
 so after that day, i could see him after school.

>> I see him after going to school starting that day.

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