What are some of the things that you do not give as gifts in your country?
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It goes without saying that I deeply appreciate it if someone gives me a gift.
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In general, there is no a specific thing that is considered not a good item as a gift in Korea.
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However, you should be conscious about whom, when, for what you are giving gifts.
>> Better: However, you should be conscious about whom, when and the reason why you are giving gifts.
>> OR: However, you should be conscious about whom, when and what for is the gift.
Depending on an occasion and circumstance, we need to carefully select a gift.
>> Depending on the occasion and circumstance, we need to carefully select a gift.
Otherwise, your good will could not be well appreciated by the recipient.
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On thanks-giving day or New Year’s Day, we usually exchange food like fruits, meat, fish, etc.
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>> OR: On Thanksgiving day or New Year\'s Day, we usually exchange food like fruits, meat, fish, etc.
Some household items like a set of shampoo, tooth paste, and soap are given as well.
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Among family members, we often give cash to our parents as a gift whereas we do not do that between friends.
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For someone’s birthday, we try to figure out what he/she needs although we rarely ask him/her what he/she likes.
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Cloths are not usually recommended to give to our friends because he has his own taste.
>> Clothes are not usually recommended to give to our friends because he/ she has his/ her own taste.
>> OR: Clothing is not usually recommended as a gift to our friends because they have different styles in dressing up themselves.
Above all, choosing a right give is a difficult job.
>> Above all, choosing a right gift is a difficult job.
The best gift is the thought that counts.
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>> OR: As the saying goes, it\'s the thought that counts when you give gifts.
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