What are some of your bad habits

2021-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have a bad habit that anxious about many things. I always get afraid of doing something. It might be a good habit but I usually think negatively. So I’m trying to think in a good way.

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Hi [이름]!

Most of the time, bad habits are simply a way of dealing with stress and boredom. Everything from biting your nails to overspending on a shopping spree to drinking every weekend to wasting time on the internet can be a simple response to stress and boredom.

But it doesn\'t have to be that way. You can teach yourself new and healthy ways to deal with stress and boredom, which you can then substitute in place of your bad habits.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I have a bad habit that anxious about many things.

>> I have a bad habit that I get anxious about many things.

I always get afraid of doing something.

>> CORRECT

It might be a good habit but I usually think negatively.

>> CORRECT

So I’m trying to think in a good way.
>> CORRECT

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