What are some of your fondest memories of Thanksgiving?

Happy Friday to you Sir [이름]^^

Wow! I love your composition.

It is really good to go to our hometown sometimes.

We can recall the good memories and make new happy ones too.

It is nice to hear that you really feel comfortable when you go home.

Thanks for an awesome essay.

Let\'s talk more about this in class.

Teacher Nina

Until recently, my parents have lived in a rural area where they were born and grew and moved to the city nearby my house a few years ago because they could not no longer work in the field.

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>> OR: Until recently, my parents have lived in a rural area where they were born and grew. They moved to the city nearby my house a few years ago because they could not no longer work in the field.

I also spent my childhood there until I went to high school in Seoul.

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For big holidays such as a Thanksgiving day or a new year’s day, I used to go to my home town to see my parents.

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>> OR: For big holidays such as a Thanksgiving day or New Year\'s day, I used to go to my home town to see my parents.

It is customary for most Korean people to hit the road to visit their home towns during the holidays, which causes a severe traffic congestion.

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I was one of the people who contributed to the traffic jam and also a victim of the terrible traffic conditions.

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It took me almost 6 to 10 hours by car or even longer to get to my hometown.

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>> OR: It took me almost six to ten hours by car or even longer to get to my hometown.

Although the long travel time was painful, it was cherishable and joyful to see my parents, neighbors, and old friends.

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>> OR: Although the long travel time was tough, it was joyful and a moment to cherish to see my parents, neighbors, and old friends.

Seeing, smelling and touching the old house where I grew, the fields and hills which I played in when I was a child made me feel comfortable just like my mother’s womb.

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