What are some of your good habits?
학생이 쓴 원문
What are some of your good habits?
My good habits is to go the GYM everyday.
I am tried to do excerise everyday.
At first, I failed so many times for making my daily routine.
It\'s sort of like habit now.
The result bring to lose my weight and gain in healthy.
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Hi [이름] !
Everything that you are today, and everything that you will ever accomplish, is determined by the quality of the habits that you form. By creating good habits and adopting a positive behavior, you too can become successful and live a prosperous life.
My good habits is to go the GYM everyday.
>> My good habit is going to the gym everyday.
I am tried to do excerise everyday.
>> I try to exercise everyday.
At first, I failed so many times for making my daily routine.
>> At first, I failed so many times making this a daily routine.
It\'s sort of like habit now.
>> It\'s sort of like a habit now.
The result bring to lose my weight and gain in healthy.
>> The result is that I lose weight and gain a healthy life.
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