What are some of your good habits?

2021-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think I have a few good habits. First one is a habit that I don\'t care about some bad news or bad things that I experienced. I think other people\'s mind first, so I don\'t care about some bad news or bad things. Second one is a habit that I can memorize something very well. So I can memorize twenty new words(include it\'s meaning) at ten minute. So I think my good habits are those two habits.

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Everything that you are today, and everything that you will ever accomplish, is determined by the quality of the habits that you form. By creating good habits and adopting a positive behavior, you too can become successful and live a prosperous life.

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I think I have a few good habits.

>>CORRECT

First one is a habit that I don\'t care about some bad news or bad things that I experienced.

>> First good habit of mine is that I don\'t care about some bad news or bad things that I experienced.

I think other people\'s mind first, so I don\'t care about some bad news or bad things.

>> I think in other people\'s perspective so I don\'t care about whether it\'s bad or not.

Second one is a habit that I can memorize something very well.

>> Second good habit is that I am good at memorizing something.

So I can memorize twenty new words(include it\'s meaning) at ten minute.

>> I can memorize 20 new words, including their meaning, in 10 minutes.

So I think my good habits are those two habits.

>> So I think those are my good habits.

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