What are some of your good habits?

2021-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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well.. I had a good habit recently. The working out habit! I work out at 6times a week. so If I can\'t work out, I couldn\'t sleep well. so I\'ll do very simple working out such as push up in the rest day.

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Everything that you are today, and everything that you will ever accomplish, is determined by the quality of the habits that you form. By creating good habits and adopting a positive behavior, you too can become successful and live a prosperous life.

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well.. I had a good habit recently.

>> Well, I have good habits recently.

The working out habit!

>> That habit is working out.

I work out at 6times a week.

>> I work out 6 times a week.

so If I can\'t work out, I couldn\'t sleep well.

>> When I don\'t work out, I couldn\'t sleep well.

so I\'ll do very simple working out such as push up in the rest day.

>> So I\'ll do even simple work outs such as push ups throughout the day.

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