What are some of your good habits?

2021-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have a habit that think a lot before I say something. I practiced it because I know that we make a lot of mistakes when we talk. So sometimes we get hurt from what other people say to us. I realize that I should be careful and think seriously before I say something to other people. And I think I don’t really make mistakes after I try it. So, I think it’s one of my good habit.

강사 첨삭

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Everything that you are today, and everything that you will ever accomplish, is determined by the quality of the habits that you form. By creating good habits and adopting a positive behavior, you too can become successful and live a prosperous life.

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I have a habit that think a lot before I say something.

>>CORRECT

I practiced it because I know that we make a lot of mistakes when we talk.

>> CORRECT

So sometimes we get hurt from what other people say to us.

>>CORRECT

I realize that I should be careful and think seriously before I say something to other people.

>> CORRECT

And I think I don’t really make mistakes after I try it.

>> CORRECT

So, I think it’s one of my good habit.

>> So, I think it’s one of my good habits.

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