What are some of your short-term and long-term goals?

2023-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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I interested in computer because I took up computer engineering. My short-term goal is to gain more knowledge and expertise in computer engineering. So, I believe that can enhance my related skills and I think it\'s important to never stop learning. Once I\'ve gained knowledge, my aim is to reach an exceptional level within the company. My long-term goal is to become a professional in computer engineering. I\'ve always wished to work for this company, so I want to achieve great things and help this company grow. Also, I think I need to keep up with the times and keep new technologies and platforms up-to-date because the field I work in is a fast-changing industry.

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~T. Jade^^
Homework: What are some of your short-term and long-term goals?
I interested in computer because I took up computer engineering.
>> I am interested in computers because I took up computer engineering.
>> OR: I am interested in computers because I pursued computer engineering.
My short-term goal is to gain more knowledge and expertise in computer engineering.
>> Correct
So, I believe that can enhance my related skills, and I think it\'s important to never stop learning.
>> Correct
Once I\'ve gained knowledge, my aim is to reach an exceptional level within the company.
>> Correct
My long-term goal is to become a professional in computer engineering.
>> Correct
I\'ve always wished to work for this company, so I want to achieve great things and help this company grow.
>> Correct
Also, I think I need to keep up with the times and keep new technologies and platforms up-to-date because the field I work in is a fast-changing industry.
>> Correct

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