What are some of your short-term and long-term goals?
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I interested in computer because I took up computer engineering.
My short-term goal is to gain more knowledge and expertise in computer engineering.
So, I believe that can enhance my related skills and I think it\'s important to never stop learning.
Once I\'ve gained knowledge, my aim is to reach an exceptional level within the company.
My long-term goal is to become a professional in computer engineering.
I\'ve always wished to work for this company, so I want to achieve great things and help this company grow.
Also, I think I need to keep up with the times and keep new technologies and platforms up-to-date because the field I work in is a fast-changing industry.
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Homework: What are some of your short-term and long-term goals?
I interested in computer because I took up computer engineering.
>> I am interested in computers because I took up computer engineering.
>> I am interested in computers because I took up computer engineering.
>> OR: I am interested in computers because I pursued computer engineering.
My short-term goal is to gain more knowledge and expertise in computer engineering.
My short-term goal is to gain more knowledge and expertise in computer engineering.
>> Correct
So, I believe that can enhance my related skills, and I think it\'s important to never stop learning.
So, I believe that can enhance my related skills, and I think it\'s important to never stop learning.
>> Correct
Once I\'ve gained knowledge, my aim is to reach an exceptional level within the company.
Once I\'ve gained knowledge, my aim is to reach an exceptional level within the company.
>> Correct
My long-term goal is to become a professional in computer engineering.
>> Correct
I\'ve always wished to work for this company, so I want to achieve great things and help this company grow.
I\'ve always wished to work for this company, so I want to achieve great things and help this company grow.
>> Correct
Also, I think I need to keep up with the times and keep new technologies and platforms up-to-date because the field I work in is a fast-changing industry.
Also, I think I need to keep up with the times and keep new technologies and platforms up-to-date because the field I work in is a fast-changing industry.
>> Correct
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