What are some other popular winter activities in your country?

2023-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Nowadays, many people enjoy skiing during winter. However, there are traditional games loved by contemporary youngsters, such as yut-nori. Yut-nori is played using four sticks called \"Yut\", a board called “mal pan”, and some tokens called “mal”. In Yut-nori, -nori is the combining form meaning “game”. The sticks are cast to determine how far a token can advance. The score is determined by counting the sticks that are over. One stick over (flat side up) and three sticks up (round side up) is called \"do\". Two sticks up and two sticks over is called \"gae\". One stick up and three sticks over is called \"geol\". All sticks over is called \"yut\", whereas all sticks up is called \"mo“. A \"do\" is worth one space advancement, a \"gae\" is worth two space advancements, a \"geol\" is worth 3 space advancements, \"yut\" is worth 4 space advancements, and \"mo\" is worth 5 space advancements. This game is won by an individual who brings all tokens home first. This is appropriate for all ages and genders.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sir Steve. Wish you a wonderful evening! ^_^
T. Irene
Nowadays, many people enjoy skiing during winter. 
>>> Correct. 
However, there are traditional games loved by contemporary youngsters, such as yut-nori. 
>>> Correct. 
Yut-nori is played using four sticks called \"Yut\", a board called “mal pan”, and some tokens called “mal”. 
>>> Correct. 
In Yut-nori, -nori is the combining form meaning “game”. 
>>> In the word Yut-nori, -nori means “game”.
The sticks are cast to determine how far a token can advance. 
>>> Correct. 
The score is determined by counting the sticks that are over. 
>>> The score is determined by counting the sticks that are overturned. 
One stick over (flat side up) and three sticks up (round side up) is called \"do\". 
>>> Correct. 
Two sticks up and two sticks over is called \"gae\". 
>>> Correct. 
One stick up and three sticks over is called \"geol\". 
>>> Correct. 
All sticks over is called \"yut\", whereas all sticks up is called \"mo“. 
>>> All sticks over are called \"yut\", whereas all sticks up are called \"mo“.
A \"do\" is worth one space advancement, a \"gae\" is worth two space advancements, a \"geol\" is worth 3 space advancements, \"yut\" is worth 4 space advancements, and \"mo\" is worth 5 space advancements. 
>>> Correct.
This game is won by an individual who brings all tokens home first. 
>>> Correct.
This is appropriate for all ages and genders.
>>> Correct.




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