What are some problems people have right after a natural disaster?
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A natural disaster causes many problems in the country not only a financial problem but also a mental problem.
>> Natural disaster cause many problems in a country, not only financially but also mentally.
Losing parents from the natural disaster for kids would be the worst thing considered as a problem.
>> Losing a parent because of natural disasters would be the worst thing a child could ever experience.
And tons of constructions should be rebuilt which costs much money.
>> Tons of buildings must be rebuilt which cost a lot of money.
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