What are some protocols you have at work?
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rules in our company.
first, we are have to go work until 08:00 am. and we leave work at 17:30 pm.
second, we have to conversation with co-workers.
because in order to any problem soultion.
third, we have a lunch time at 12:30~13:30.
finally, progress apporved add man is team-leader, and head of a department. sometimes R&D center Reader too.
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Hi, [이름]!
I agree! Working hours and break times are included when we talk about company rules. Also, the behavior of employees is very important in maintaining a good working environment.
- T. Caitlyn
rules in our company.
>> These are the rules in our company.
first, we are have to go work until 08:00 am. and we leave work at 17:30 pm.
first, we are have to go work until 08:00 am. and we leave work at 17:30 pm.
>> First, we have to go to work by 08:00 AM, and we leave work at 17:30 PM.
second, we have to conversation with co-workers.
second, we have to conversation with co-workers.
>> Second, we have to have conversations with co-workers.
because in order to any problem soultion.
because in order to any problem soultion.
>> This is in order to solve any problems.
third, we have a lunch time at 12:30~13:30.
third, we have a lunch time at 12:30~13:30.
>> Third, we have lunch from 12:30 to 13:30.
finally, progress apporved add man is team-leader, and head of a department. sometimes R&D center Reader too.
finally, progress apporved add man is team-leader, and head of a department. sometimes R&D center Reader too.
>> Finally, the progress approved add man is the team leader and head of the department; sometimes, the R&D center leader as well.
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