What are some reason why people argue? Give at least two (2) answers

2017-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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There are several reasons why people argue. Firstly difference results in argument. While many people think that diversity and aariety give us happiness and various cultures, some people feel uncomortable from difference and diversity. Secondly, zero-sum game result in conflict. Each decision gives some people benefit and other people cost. The people who should pay cost by any decision could be opposite opinion.

강사 첨삭

Good evening! ^^,)

Happy Friday, [이름]!


Thank you for answering your homework.

You did a good job here!^^

You are right, people argue because of so many different reasons.

But it all boils down to how they face the consequences.


_Teacher Mayleen :)


There are several reasons why people argue.

>>> Correct!


Firstly difference results in argument.

>>> Firstly, difference results to arguments.


While many people think that diversity and aariety give us happiness and various cultures, some people feel uncomortable from difference and diversity.

>>> While many people think that diversity and variety give us happiness, other cultures and other people feel uncomfortable from these differences and diversity.


Secondly, zero-sum game result in conflict.

>>> Secondly, lack of result leads to conflicts.


Each decision gives some people benefit and other people cost.

>>> Each decision gives some people benefit and others a disadvantage.


The people who should pay cost by any decision could be opposite opinion.

>>> The people who should pay the cost of their decision could do the opposite.

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