What are some reason why privacy is important for you?
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Hi Jun!
Let\'s be careful in understanding the question for our homework.
We will talk about this topic in class.
You made some good sentences here.
You should be proud.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think that every people on the world need their own individual time to refresh their emotions.
>> I think that every person in the world needs his/her own time to revive his/her emotions.
Everytime when we awaken, we have to do what we must do.
>> Correct
In that time we must use our energy.
>> During these times, we must use our energy.
But our energy has a limit.
>> However, our energy also has its limits.
So I think that we need the time that we do nothing, just refresh or recharge, and It is the definition of \"Privacy\".
>> So I think that we need time just to do nothing, refresh or recharge and this is the definition of \"Privacy\".
The conclusion is that privacy is kind of recharging or refreshing time, and we need it so much to keep going our life.
>> The conclusion is that privacy is time for us to gain our strength back and go on with our lives.
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