What are some reasons why it\'s hard to be financially stable?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because there are really many temptation in life. And all of the temptation related money.
If we want to eat some delicious food, We have to pay for store much money.
So if you want a stable finances, You will be restrain one self harder.
And i recommend to invest something. There are a lot of things for investing.
Most basic investment item is stock. It\'s so easier than other investment items if you have a mobile phone.
In my country, Most older people invest in real estate. For invest in real estate, you need a lot of money.
So, I think investing stock is more effective to younger and Investing in real estate is more effective to older people.
And finally, If you have a lot of money, Buying an apartment that located in Seoul is most important.
Seoul real estate wasn\'t fail in lifetime. But it\'s is really really expensive.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jun!
And I recommend to invest something.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
What are some reasons why it\'s hard to be financially stable?
Because there are really many temptation in life.
>> It\'s because there are really many temptations in life.
And all of the temptation related money.
>> And all of the temptations are related to money.
If we want to eat some delicious food, We have to pay for store much money.
>> If we want to eat some delicious food, We have to pay much money to the store.
So if you want a stable finances, You will be restrain one self harder.
>> So if you want stable finances, you will restrain yourself harder.
And I recommend to invest something.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I also recommend investing on something.
There are a lot of things for investing.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are many things to invest on.
Most basic investment item is stock.
>> The most basic investment item is stocks.
It\'s so easier than other investment items if you have a mobile phone.
>> CORRECT!
In my country, most older people invest in real estate.
>> CORRECT!
For invest in real estate, you need a lot of money.
>> For investing in real estate, you need a lot of money.
So, I think investing stock is more effective to younger and Investing in real estate is more effective to older people.
>> So, I think investing in stocks is more effective to younger people and investing in real estate is more effective to older people.
And finally, if you have a lot of money, buying an apartment that located in Seoul is most important.
And finally, if you have a lot of money, buying an apartment that located in Seoul is most important.
>> And finally, if you have a lot of money, buying an apartment that\'s located in Seoul is most important.
Seoul real estate wasn\'t fail in lifetime.
>> Seoul real estate would never fail in this lifetime.
But it\'s is really really expensive.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But it would definitely cost a lot.
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