What are some reasons why privacy is important for you?

Hello Rana!

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T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Privacy is the state of being away from other people.

>> CORRECT!

Privacy is important for everyone including me because if my privacy was invaded I can feel nervous and in a bad mood. 

>> Privacy is important for everyone including me because if my privacy was invaded I can feel nervous and have a bad mood. 

If everybody knew what I do in my privacy, it can be used for a bad thing or criminal purpose. 

>> If everybody knew what I do in my privacy, it can be used for a bad thing or for a criminal purpose. 

Therefore, I think personal privacy must be protected.

>> CORRECT!