What are some reasons why privacy is important for you?

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Here are my corrections for you:

For me, I think it\'s necessity to have some secrets that can\'t tell anyone. 

>> For me, I think it\'s a necessity to have some secrets that I can\'t tell anyone. 

It makes each other feel pressured that telling all of the secrets to others. 

>> It makes people feel pressured to tell all of their secrets to others. 

Also, some sense of distance is necessity for the relationship as well.

>> Also, some sense of distance is a necessity for the relationship as well.